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Rockingashe

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Hey everyone! I was hoping that you guys/gals would be gracious enough to look at my novel and see what you think? I haven't been writing lately because I ended up breaking my pinky finger at work and it's kept me back from writing. I released 2 chapters today and I was wondering what everyone's opinion is. Any feed back is helpful! Thank you all, and I hope you have a great day/night!

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The Vampiric Lover

Kamen was a young man who had recently graduated from high school and was looking forward to the next chapter of his life. However, fate had other plans for him. One day, while wandering in the woods, he stumbled upon a mysterious man named Alistair. The two started a conversation,...
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Rockingashe said:
Hey everyone! I was hoping that you guys/gals would be gracious enough to look at my novel and see what you think? I haven't been writing lately because I ended up breaking my pinky finger at work and it's kept me back from writing. I released 2 chapters today and I was wondering what everyone's opinion is. Any feed back is helpful! Thank you all, and I hope you have a great day/night!
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