WhimsicalLantern
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I'd love some feedback on my stories. All of them except for Earth Dies are male-to-female gender-bending romance, so if that's not your thing, that's totally fine. I write primarily for my own enjoyment, but I'd love to learn more about what my readers enjoy - as well as general tips for how to improve in the future. My writing tends to come in spurts, then long dry spells where I struggle to be creative. When I get an idea, I tend to write it as quickly as I can, then do an editing pass, and then publish.
Here's my works:
Here's my works:
- Exploring Alexandra: Male to Female gender bender, with a twist where he flips back and forth on a timed basis. Alex and his wife navigate life and their relationship with new dynamics, running into a variety of issues with friends, work, etc. 250k words over four story arcs, completed (F/F and M/F depending on what body Alex is in).
- Freakiest Friday: 30k word short story about a husband and wife in relationship trouble swapping bodies, figuring out how bad things are, and finding a way to build their relationship back up, regaining trust and love in one another (M/F in swapped bodies).
- Refactoring Tim: 75k words. Male to female gender bender, Tim navigates a new body while finding love and facing new challenges with honesty (F/F + M/F + M/F/F).
- Fortune's Daughter: 65k words. Male to female gender bender, James comes to realize that the new body is a much more authentic version, finally finding happiness and love (F/F + M/F/F).
- Plowing Evelyn: 57k words, short hiatus while I write more chapters. Male to female gender bender. Fairly fluff-filled, at least for now. F/F (with potential of F/F/F).
- Humbling Helen: 78k words, story is done and publishing 5x/week from now until early March. Male to female gender bender, a bit of a darker story arc than the others (F/F + M/F).
- Earth Dies: Female-led LitRPG-lite in a post-apocalyptic world, ends up turning into a Futa, there's a decent bit of F/F romance. 250k words, but I paused the story.