Fresh Writer here, looking for some Feedback

DukePropheta

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Cheers, all. I'm not new to writing, but this is my first time publishing my works anywhere online. This is also the first serialized work I've attempted to write. It's called "The Mann, The Myth, The Legend", and it's a Fantasy, litRPG story with some unique elements I plan to introduce later. I've posted seven chapters so far, the seventh having been posted just today, and I'm looking to get people to look over it and provide some feedback, if possible.

Check it out if you'd like, and even feel free to leave comments to tell me what you like or dislike.

Feedback's necessary for growth, after all, and I want to make sure this story is good. You can find it here:

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/529867/the-mann-the-myth-the-legend/
 
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