Free Developmental Feedback on Chapter One From a Un-Seasoned (Unless you include salt!) Editor

[Juia_Darkcrest]

Hey writers/authors/weird furry creatures from Alpha Centuri!

I’m an unseasoned book editor, fanfic writer looking to turn author, wanting to troll connect with the Scribble Hub Smut Hub community. I know how hard it is (you dirty dog you) to tell if your work is actually any good or if it is just a pile of hot garbage, so I’m offering free abuse developmental feedback on Chapter 1 of your trash pile manuscript.

What I Provide for Free:

1. An unapologetic first impression of your web novel's synopsis and main page.
2. A biased opinion of your opening chapter.
3. Identification of any shit writing major "red flags" in prose or logic. This will include my own red flags.
4. Brutally honest notes on issues of the trash pile manuscript. This will include inflammatory hot takes, salty anecdotes, and maybe a few edits if you're lucky and I use Grammarly to pick them up.

How to Apply:

• Comment below with your story link and genre.
• Send me a DM with your Chapter 1 (Google Docs link with 'Commenter' access preferred) If you want me to truly roast help you with your work.

Current Status: [Open or Closed, depending on my mood]

 

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[LuoirM]

I'm too afraid because of how cringe mine is