First time writer, need feedback for a fantasy novel currently only have 4 chapters.

[innocentguy1947]

Good morning, good evening, good afternoon! I hope u guys are alright. I have read so many novels and watched so many movies and series. I also wanted to create something of my own. There was always an idea in my mind. So one day i gathered courage and just started writing my first novel. I have published 5 chapters of that novel. But it's still not getting any views or ratings. So, I want to know if the story is really worth reading or not?

Please give your honest feedback for my novel.
My novel's name is Sins Carved In Blood: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1547247/sins-carved-in-blood/

 

[SurfAngel_1031]

I read your story.
Initially I had a great review saying how lovely things were other than the first chapter looking like an outline.
Which is what made me suspicious.
So I checked your text with an AI detection site and found it's between 25-48% AI written.

There's no way I can rate it or give feedback to a story that's not human generated.

Furthermore, it's not marked as AI.

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[FieryLou]

The formating is beyond weird. The

 

[StoneInky]

Your work was edited by AI, please note that down in the synopsis.

 

[SurfAngel_1031]

Your work was edited by AI, please note that down in the synopsis.

Given the difference between chapters 1 then 2-4 it's not likely just edited.

 

[StoneInky]

Given the difference between chapters 1 then 2-4 it's not likely just edited.

If it's generated, I think the work itself is against site rules. In that case we should go to Tony.

 

[SurfAngel_1031]

If it's generated, I think the work itself is against site rules. In that case we should go to Tony.

The AI detection I used said that it was anywhere between 25-48% AI created. Like I said it was chapter 1 that was so out of the ordinary that I took a chance and there it was.

 

[SurfAngel_1031]

Chapter 4 alone :

 

[OokamiOkuri]

Just the synopsis alone has a very formulaic phrasing and no distinct voice or personality. No way I am reading the first chapter.