First time writer looking for any and all feedback

[Horrible-Void]

Mainly I want to know if my character interactions are good as well as the mystery I set up.

Missing Hearts

Siblings Chris and Liah Mitchells already rocky relationship is put to the test when they, and their loved ones, get tangled up in a strange series of murders on a drive home one night. The following ordeal that sends one of them into a spiral of madness, drug abuse and...

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but all feedback is welcomed