First litrpg. Anyone willing to bet read it?

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Not a beta reader, cause I'm a big stupid head and don't think I can do that, but I will say, that sounds like an awesome plot. I dunno why but I like that concept of someone being forced to follow the RPG rules and constantly grinding for EXP or else they become a mindless NPC.

Sounds like a neat story.
 

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Not a beta reader, cause I'm a big stupid head and don't think I can do that, but I will say, that sounds like an awesome plot. I dunno why but I like that concept of someone being forced to follow the RPG rules and constantly grinding for EXP or else they become a mindless NPC.

Sounds like a neat story.
Thanks! When I first had the idea, I almost didn't use it because I couldn't believe nobody else had written a book like that already.
 

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Thanks! When I first had the idea, I almost didn't use it because I couldn't believe nobody else had written a book like that already.
I'll definitely check it out when it releases. The plot hook alone is very unique and builds tension
 

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If I weren't an historically awful beta reader (as in "finish reading the day before it goes live and send feedback the day after" awful) I'd volunteer. But then again I've only written one story in the genre so am not an expert by a long shot.
 
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