first half of my first story here done!!

[Frank-9976]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/597660/codys-whiteboards/

My writing is really choppy but besides that I think it's coming along well so far, it's a surrealist short story, always really liked Wayside School when I was growing up.
Feedback appreciated!!

 

[FiendsForHire]

Hey awesome! They say if people finish the first half, they're much more likely to finish the entire book. So great work, keep it up.

 

[Lloyd]

Make it more surreal.
I'm the authority on surrealist literature here on scribblehub.

 

[Frank-9976]

Make it more surreal.
I'm the authority on surrealist literature here on scribblehub.

I feel blessed to be in the presence of the surreal man. I'm going to check out your work for ideas on how to be more surreal. Ty for reading!

 

[Lloyd]

I feel blessed to be in the presence of the surreal man. I'm going to check out your work for ideas on how to be more surreal. Ty for reading!

That's just my stupid side project I write when I'm bored.

 

[Frank-9976]

That's just my stupid side project I write when I'm bored.

Ah ok. Can you elaborate on your initial feedback then? IDK if it was more of a joke or a serious recommendation. Same with your claim about being the authority on surrealism on SH.