First fourteen chapters of Equestea rewritten

[artifactmicheal]

I decided to do a rewrite of the series I was working on, so a new chapter update will be after the rewrite. Trying to get traction and feedback because the original plan was for a game and not a novel, but I decided to do it anyways. Will like to get tips and feedback on the novel. The link will be pasted below. It's just a hobby I do on the side to write; maybe this will determine if I will go into writing full time. Please do leave comments to guide me as I turn this currently struggling story into a captivating one.

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EQUESTEA: THE NAME OF A NEW WORLD

With conflicting memories of who she might be, Gilly finds her self in this unknown world. Memories of war and needless blood shed fills her mind as she debates on these words 'WHO AM I'. Seeking to answer this questions SHe tries to blend in this new world. Without an...

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