I'm writing another fantasy web novel and I finished writing my first chapter. What do you guys think?
Synopsis: In this space opera epic, eighteen-year-old Dilara served as the sole maid in a mansion for her cruel sisters and Mother, as she never got a chance to explore her life besides work. Tired of her misery, she begins to go on a quest to defeat the dark lord and save the galaxy of Aniva after her kingdom was nearly destroyed and her family was in danger. How will she ever defeat the dark lord when fate's preventing her from doing so though?
This series will contain a female spirit, an old woman in cloak, spaceships, a temperate planet, a desert planet, and space travel
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Synopsis: In this space opera epic, eighteen-year-old Dilara served as the sole maid in a mansion for her cruel sisters and Mother, as she never got a chance to explore her life besides work. Tired of her misery, she begins to go on a quest to defeat the dark lord and save the galaxy of Aniva after her kingdom was nearly destroyed and her family was in danger. How will she ever defeat the dark lord when fate's preventing her from doing so though?
This series will contain a female spirit, an old woman in cloak, spaceships, a temperate planet, a desert planet, and space travel
Aniva-Volume 1=Chapter 1
Shakila's foot knocked the bucket over to the dark brown, wooden floor near Dilara, while Ingrid walked beside Shakila, chuckling viciously. "Whoops!" Shakila covered her mouth with her eyes broadened, pretending to be shocked. "My apologies, Dilara." Shakila and Ingrid laughed even more wh...
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