[first chap]Superpower/Sci-Fi/Fantasy/Action -- not isekai

[AetherialCore]

First, thank you for clicking this thread.

I would like to ask for some feedback on my weeb novel, New World Paradise.

A chapter is about 10,000 words in length, and the prose is garbage, but I hope it's enjoyable.
Thank you again.

PS: asking for feedback is really stressful, for some reason....

 

[Zinless]

TEN THOUNSAND?!

I consider anything above 3000 words per chapter a bit hard to read, but I might just be lazy.

I really recommend you split them up into 4 chapters at least, people here have poor attention span and will probably click off the chapter after the first quarter of it. Splitting them up will also make them a bit more digestible.

Grammar wise, your prologue "?" is a bit hard for me to read, but I understood after staring at it for a few seconds. The dreaded 10.000 chapter on the other hand, seems alright. Just... split them up... please...