First Alright-Ish Story

[epohalt]

Hi! I'm still fairly new to scribblehub and have posted a few mediocre stories.

I'm really enjoying the newest one I started writing, and have seen a few comments that I greatly appreciate.

Any tips for fledgling writers or reviews about my story (in any fashion; i.e. the synopsis, characters, or pacing, would be greatly appreciated.)

I'm aware the cover art is bad but I am
no artists and did my best (with no ai used) and am looking to commission an artist for the cover.

I want this to be a serialization that takes readers thoughts and wants into consideration, (not like early-Homestuck levels but maybe similar.) But to do that I need a reader base first. There are set plot points I have in mind already but I am trying to let the story flow.

Other than that I'd love any feedback/constructive criticism. Link below.

Voidkin and The Princess Of Nothing

 

[L1aei]

I'm really enjoying the newest one I started writing, and have seen a few comments that I greatly appreciate.

So, first thing I checked wasn't the synopsis or story, but the comments. You should engage with them more. I saw one state "They killed all the fun math" and that had me wondering what that meant. Engagement is key if you want to keep comments coming.

 

[epohalt]

So, first thing I checked wasn't the synopsis or story, but the comments. You should engage with them more. I saw one state "They killed all the fun math" and that had me wondering what that meant. Engagement is key if you want to keep comments coming.

Thank you for the advice! I always get nervous responding but your reply is helping me get over that! /gen

 

[Juia_Darkcrest]

How to attract readers on SH | Scribble Hub Forum

Linked above is a guide for some more advice. Take it or leave it, it isn't a holy bible of getting readers or anything, just some helpful tips.

 

[epohalt]

How to attract readers on SH | Scribble Hub Forum

Linked above is a guide for some more advice. Take it or leave it, it isn't a holy bible of getting readers or anything, just some helpful tips.

Thank you so much! I'll be sure to take a look immediately! ^.^