EMatthews18
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The Vampire Idol
Darius Myeong-Jun, 21 years old, is a member of the popular K-Pop trio, City of Angels, based out of LA in California. But he has a secret: he’s a vampire and falling in love with one of his best guy friends was not in the cards…
I wrote this and need some feedback. All I ask is be a bit nice but offer constructive criticism cause this is my first story. Also yes I know the format is unorthodox.and I am from Pennsylvania so if my stuff looks grammatically incorrect it isn’t. That’s just how I write and talk
edit: I’m rewriting it
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