Feelings and Fondness

[harrydouthwaite]

Here is what I've spent the past year working on. I've posted in several threads over the past couple of months, but only one or two of them actually responded and even then they didn't read most of it.

I've almost finished, I just have the last chapter to edit which should be done very soon.

Feelings and Fondness

A Trains On The Brain series story. In the mid-2000s, eleven-year-old Robin Brush lives in the commuter belt village of Stanstead Abbotts in Hertfordshire, England. He suffers constantly from being bullied, ridiculed, or misunderstood by almost everyone. Forced to live an isolated life as an...

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Hopefully there's at least someone here who might appreciate what I've written.

 

[Alseki.]

Hey, I have seen your novel (on my review thread).
I am working on a review, it is excellently written :).

Just, it might take some time.
Sorry for the delay, but trust me, your efforts are clearly visible and are bearing fruits.

 

[harrydouthwaite]

Hey, I have seen your novel (on my review thread).
I am working on a review, it is excellently written :).

Just, it might take some time.
Sorry for the delay, but trust me, your efforts are clearly visible and are bearing fruits.

Of course. I know you said you were working on it a couple of weeks ago.

I just finished the last chapter.

 

[harrydouthwaite]

Just a bump. I'm still interested in feedback or suggestions regarding my story of this title.

 

[LoneQuack]

As crazy as it sounds, this isn't the right place to find it. I'm guessing you are a new author, and as one, you've surely been through a phase of constantly thinking about your book and only that. Most people in this thread fall into this category, and to an extend this makes everyone else's works boring, unattractive, irrelevant and/or tiring. Why spend you time reading someone else's mid story when you have your own master piece? It's a bit harsh (and I'm possibly overexaggerating) but it is true to at least some extent, so yeah. I don't think this is going to make you feel any better, but at least knowing the reason might do something.