HoracioGui
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Apocalypse in World of Magic
After dying from overworking, a 22-year-old woman reincarnates into the body of a 12-year-old girl named Lilian in a world called Iféria, where a zombie apocalypse threatens the survival of humans. In a world governed by magic, Lilian discovers that she has the gift of blood manipulation and...
I would like feedback on my story with constructive opinions about, character, world, plot