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[Jukai]

Twelve Pillars

Now trapped in the body of Hajime Nao, a teenager in the kingdom of Veidra, the district of Kethros, where only the strong survive. He’s thrown into a world ruled by the Twelve Pillars, gods who grant terrifying, battle-born blessings. With no way home and danger at every turn,...

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I've been planning this story out thoroughly, I am aware that the writing is kinda trash, but I would like to think that the recent chapters so far are a little more engaging as In finally beginning the first serious arc.

 

[blackcrowcrowd]

Synopsis sounds like generic transmigration without any uniqueness (yeah sure twelve pillars and whatnot is slightly unique but it doesn't really explain anything), you probably should add something that can hook people. I'm not even interested enough to read chapter 1

#Edit: bored, so I read chapter one and... it's kinda meh (still readable at least)