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MakBow

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Read the first following chapters and tell me what you think. It's a novel that is inspired by Redo of Healer, Failure Frame, The Wrong Way To Use Healing Magic, and other series and games.
I followed, you guessed it, an actual support healer (not the 'healing' that Keyaru does) with a similar set up to Redo of Healer, characters you may recognize as being similar, and how he wants to get revenge no matter what while in an apocalyptic fantasy world (Not isekai)
Criticism I want at the moment:
- Characters
- Plot
- How I did the 'sex' scene (It's barely a sex scene really)
- Writing structure

Re:Healer | Scribble Hub
(I'm someone who likes taking trash and making it into something good or at least decent)
(No, there is no crazy revenge porn)
 
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