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Took a look. I like the covert art. Also you directly tell the reader, who the protagonist is; that's good too.

But is it mecha, or magic? Or ... what kind abilities or world system is the MC going to gain or use? (This can be helpful to put in the synopsis because readers are thinking... I want a magic story. Or I want a dragon story. Or I want a sci-fi story, etc.) You can help steer them into this, by STATING it in the synopsis.

Thanks.

I hope you can give me feedback on my feedback request also. Thanks.
 
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naosu said:
But is it mecha, or magic? Or ... what kind abilities or world system is the MC going to gain or use? (This can be helpful to put in the synopsis because readers are thinking... I want a magic story. Or I want a dragon story. Or I want a sci-fi story, etc.) You can help steer them into this, by STATING it in the synopsis.
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@DDDepth

Personal opinion, I don't fully agree with this...

I think your synopsis is short and clean. Maybe. It could use a more dramatic way of telling it... but it can also go without and work as is.

To me the genre, tags, and synopsis, you already have all the parts there for me to know what the "story" is.

I don't think loading in more info will make it more palatable.

You can draft one and see what happens, but I feel like, may be finish your first arc and then worry about the fine points of the synopsis.

If you are looking to use it as the dust jacket to a book on a shelf, then yeah, add a pinch more context.

P.s. personally, l don't really care about synopsis i only read genre and tags. I like the surprise.
 
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