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[nexuus]

Hey,

I started writing a novel and completed the first chapter. Its about a male warrior who was slain in battle and rebirthed as a weak support. He also changes into a girl for the ones who are into that. I was wondering if i could receive some constructive feedback based on your thoughts of the chapter. I want to know if this is a type of novel people would read and if my writing is decent. Here's the link for it:

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1085924/the-strongest-warrior-is-now-a-support/

Thanks!

 

[NOTkaosin21]

epic

 

[MasFaqih]

Hey,

I started writing a novel and completed the first chapter. Its about a male warrior who was slain in battle and rebirthed as a weak support. He also changes into a girl for the ones who are into that. I was wondering if i could receive some constructive feedback based on your thoughts of the chapter. I want to know if this is a type of novel people would read and if my writing is decent. Here's the link for it:

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1085924/the-strongest-warrior-is-now-a-support/

Thanks!

I think beautiful female lead and social outcast is a bit too contradict with each other, other girl not immediately hate a more beautiful girl than themselves, Even more so in a cultivation world, where beauty can be cultivated.