Feedback Wanted: Twisty Medieval Fantasy with Royal Intrigue

SarahsBuzzard

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Hey folks! I’m looking to get some feedback on my story so far. It leans more into medieval fantasy with a dark comedic edge (just a heads up). I know LitRPG is the most popular genre on Scribblehub, and while I enjoy those too, this one isn’t quite in that style, so keep that in mind going in.

Click here to read "Fire and Fools"

I’d really appreciate any feedback you have—whether it’s on the pacing, character development, world-building, or just general impressions. Everything helps!

NOTE: The cover is AI-generated for now, but I’m planning to hire a real artist when I convert it to an eBook.

Thanks in advance for taking the time to read and share your thoughts ?
 
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