[Feedback Wanted] The Dragon Hunter’s Bond

[SabrielSilver]

Hi Scribble Hub! I’m Sabriel Silver, and I just released the first three chapters of my new fantasy series The Dragon Hunter’s Bond.

Expect:
• A small, fierce dragon with sharp instincts
• A desperate quest to save a dying twin
• Skyships, dragons, sky pirates, shifting glyphs, and emotion-fueled power
• High personal stakes and a trust that builds under pressure
• A world where every decision leaves a mark

I would love your feedback, especially on tone, pacing, and worldbuilding.

Read chapter 1 by clicking here or
scribblehub.com/read/1495921-the-dragon-hunters-bond/chapter/1495925/

Thank you for reading,
Sabriel Silver

 

[Akkizakura]

@StoneInky do your thing.

 

[StoneInky]

@StoneInky do your thing.

Sent it to some AI checkers. The results were not good. I'm ignoring people with AI edited stuff who ask for reviews.

Tis like bringing factory made pottery to an artisan shop.

 

[SabrielSilver]

AI checkers aren’t reliable at this time so it’s a waste of time to use them. While it’s understandable that people, like you, may trust them, they often produce inaccurate results. It’s important to question claims made with such certainty, like yours, when the technology itself is still inconsistent and unproven. So you are speaking from nonsense, about nonsense and I don’t know how to respond other than to call that out.

 

[Fairemont]

Hmmmmm...

Have you written anything else or is this your first fiction?

 

[Prince_Azmiran_Myrian]

I saw that there is a romance subplot, is it between the MC and the dragon?