Yamazaru
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I started a novel for fun. I wanted to combine a bunch of random and crazy shit. I'd like to see thoughts, feedback, and tips for future writing.
Synopsis: Makeinu is a 16 year old high school student giving his shots at opening a restaurant, with one problem, he has a curse where he cooks unappealing food that tastes amazing, and extremely appealing food that tastes awful. This curse tries to mess with Makeinu's head and make him go crazy. This curse leads him to meet Myoko, a pyromaniac girl who can shapeshift into a robot. The two have a set goal of starting a restaurant, and try to break the curse.
Trust me, the story is crazier than how it sounds, at least I think it's crazier.
Click here if you want to read and then give thoughts. It's only 2 chapters for now, since im working on chapter 3.
Synopsis: Makeinu is a 16 year old high school student giving his shots at opening a restaurant, with one problem, he has a curse where he cooks unappealing food that tastes amazing, and extremely appealing food that tastes awful. This curse tries to mess with Makeinu's head and make him go crazy. This curse leads him to meet Myoko, a pyromaniac girl who can shapeshift into a robot. The two have a set goal of starting a restaurant, and try to break the curse.
Trust me, the story is crazier than how it sounds, at least I think it's crazier.
Click here if you want to read and then give thoughts. It's only 2 chapters for now, since im working on chapter 3.