Feedback Swap from StrayCat

[_StrayCat_]

Hey all,

I started putting together a story last year, and I'm new to SH. I've spent a fair amount of time refining my story and trying to bring forth my best, but I'm always curious to hear perspectives of how my story is evolving, and I'm sure others feel the same way and are looking for a perspective on their story!

So let's do a review swap - I'd like to review stories and help share feedback. Here's what I can do/what I'd request

• Submit your story here and include a link + how many words/chapters you'd like me to read and what type of feedback you'd like to get
  • I'll ask that you read the same amount of my story and tell me some of your thoughts in this thread
• Let me know if you'd like the receive your feedback here or in a DM
• I'll put your story in progress or in the queue and will try to get through what I can. It might take me a bit to get to your story, although I should have consistent time for a bit to go through your stories!
• What I won't review: Smut, and outside of that, most things are fine, but if there's something falls into a category where I don't feel comfortable reviewing the material I'll DM you letting you know that I'll pass on the review.

Here's an example of what would be helpful to share, and also the info about my story.

My story is titled Under Quiet Skies and is a Dark Fantasy story with a bit of a BL subplot - https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1927716/under-quiet-skies/

Here's a brief synopsis:

For generations, storms were the lifeblood of the world. Within their heart surged Kaida, an energy that fell in crystal shards, harvested by sifters and refined to build the barriers that kept civilizations safe from Murasi, the faceless beings born of a chaotic energy called Mura.

But the skies have gone still. Storms have been scarce for more than a decade. The balance falters, and fear takes root.

Erith, a reluctant sifter from the kingdom of Aldarath, carries a secret that may end the Kaida Drought, or doom what remains of the world.

I'm really interested to hear any thoughts about the story, the atmosphere, pacing, really anything that comes to mind! Your feedback would be greatly appreciated!

Let me know if you want a review!

 

[_StrayCat_]

^ I updated the post a bit, let me know if you're interested in a review!