Feedback/Review Swap

[Tripleblack]

Hello.

I've been silently writing on here for a few months and I figured it was time to interact with the community a bit. I want to hear some opinions on what I've written so far and in return, I'm happy to go through someone else's work. All I ask is that you finish the first two chapters and from there you can read as much as you think you need to get a grasp on the story.

Please tell me what you think works or doesn't work in the story. Also please tell me how many chapters you read.

Here's the link:https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1135540/the-revival-of-the-vampire-empress/

 

[PBJ_Time]

I don't often read smut, but I'm down for a swap. I'll get to yours tomorrow, so please let me know when you'll check out my story.

Beware the Horde [Isekai LitRPG]

New chapters every MWF, 8:00 PM EST. Also available on Royal Road. *** ~Too raw to live, too far to die.~ MMA fanatic and local champion Hajime Kato once thought the world was his oyster. Now, after his untimely death, he gets thrown into a new reality dominated by a game screen...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[PensandKeys]

If you are still interested in doing a review swap. I am interested.

 

[CharlesEBrown]

Just a first impression thing - the chapters are not numbered. Fortunately, they seem to be posted sequentially, oldest at the "end" newest at the top but sometimes chapter numbers help, especially if postings wind up out of sequence (been running into that on a story I was following - for a while the newest was "on top" and now, for some reason, they're posted running down from where the author took a short break).