Feedback Request: Cultivation, Harem, Romance, and Chaos — Care to Share Your Thoughts?

[ItsDevil]

Greetings, fellow keyboard cultivators and seekers of good stories! ?‍

I'm writing a novel titled "Heaven-Tier Trash: The Empresses Chose Me," a blend of cultivation, harem, action, romance, and a protagonist who, though underestimated, harbors a power that could shake the heavens... or at least cause an earthquake in his sect.

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Brief Synopsis:​

Lin Feng, a young man everyone calls "trash," possesses the Heart of Chaos, a forbidden power that connects him to the primordial energy of creation. The empresses of the world didn't choose him by mistake... and now, his ascent is destined to be legendary, though nothing on his path will be easy.

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I'm looking for honest feedback. ?‍?‍??

 

[GrotesqueHeaven]

I think you forgot to add a link to the story. Or I am just blind and can't find it.

 

[SurfAngel_1031]

Chapter 1:

Chapter 2:

I stopped after this.
It's right at the line, so there is a small margin for error. If this is accidental, then simply fix it.
But because you obviously used some AI and didn't indicate, I'm not reading it.
Be well and I hope this helps.