Feedback on the Prologue, I posted

[GreedAndGluttony]

†UNHOLY PRIEST†

Note: Extremely cruel and vicious protagonist Shadows. Beware of shadows. An alluring light casts an unholy shadow. People called him charming, seductive, and divine. A light, that purified all Evil. But who truly was he. A priest who guided people by the day. Or. A necromancer, who caged...

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[iifinch]

Hey, I checked out your story. I like it, it's pretty good. I'll leave a comment on it rather than a post in the forum to try to boost its popularity. Check out mine if you have a chance.

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[Napelynn]

Hey, I checked out your story. I like it, it's pretty good. I'll leave a comment on it rather than a post in the forum to try to boost its popularity. Check out mine if you have a chance.

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Umm... a link to the dashboard isn't a link to your story.

 

[GreedAndGluttony]

Hey, I checked out your story. I like it, it's pretty good. I'll leave a comment on it rather than a post in the forum to try to boost its popularity. Check out mine if you have a chance.

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Well, that's a link to your dashboard.........but I did find your story through your comment in my novel. I will check it out when i get the chance. I'm neither a critic nor a professional writer but a amateur writer, so, don't be disappointed if you find my opinion, not so useful