Feedback on "The Final Boss Reset You!" (My First Story)

[Tyhond]

I posted the first story I made on Scribble Hub, "The Final Boss Reset You!"
The main genre is Comedy and the sub-genre are Fantasy, Slice-Of-Life, Drama Romance.

Summary:

“MUFUFUFU~! You have entered the final level of this world, the Demon Lord’s Domain! And I congratulated you for making this far. However, I have never been beaten before and the reason why is because you I am the almighty final boss! Here and now, ready to return you to the start!”
Nameiko Lessime, or Nameless for short. A young girl assigned to be the final boss of a VRMMORPG game—WAIT! She is a hacker who decided to be the final boss of the game. The undefeated demon lord, a sadist that RESET their progress back to nothingness beginning! And for that reason. . .
The Final Boss Reset You!

Any feedback will do! Please and thank you! ^-^

The Final Boss Reset You! | Scribble Hub

 

[Snusmumriken]

Hard to judge by the first chapter alone, especially if the story looks to be written in a nonsensical style.

Watch out for the tenses. you are using the present tense when it should be past (actions) and vice versa (in the dialogue), there are also quite a few run-on sentences that make it harder to read.

i would say it needs at least more chapters because the premise of the story isn't actually explained yet. The stakes aren't really clear.

 

[Agentt]

All I can say is, yep. Hacking indeed works that way. Totally accurate