Sukawara
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Hello This is my first attempt at writing a story and as I've finished the first "Arc/Volume" I wanted some feedback on how I can improve and make the next part better. Any advice is welcome
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The Reincarnated Swordsman is a genius mage
In my previous life, I was hailed as a 'genius' fighter, a true force to be reckoned with. but fate took an unexpected twist, and I met my end on the battlefield. To my astonishment, I awoke after my demise, face to face with a deity who revealed that they...