Feedback On My Novel Series

[StrideInTheNight]

Hello, hello! I've spent about 5 or so years writing my own original series. I actually finished two books. I started on my third one mid last year, but I've never gotten feedback on them online. They've accumulated a little over 2k views all together, but I'm not sure what to take from silent views.

I'd be grateful for some feedback. Even if it's someone evaluating one chapter. Just tell me your honest opinion.

Gray Heroics: Book 2

A continuation of the previous book, Gray Heroics: Book 1. The world doesn't wait for heroes to be ready. In the aftermath of Book I, the cracks begin to show. Galivinth is no longer carried by raw potential or conviction alone. Powerful enemies, brutal losses, and widening threats force him...

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[Bane89]

Were you looking for feedback on book two specifically? Or would you be ok if I started with book 1?

 

[Rolanov]

Hello, hello! I've spent about 5 or so years writing my own original series. I actually finished two books. I started on my third one mid last year, but I've never gotten feedback on them online. They've accumulated a little over 2k views all together, but I'm not sure what to take from silent views.

I'd be grateful for some feedback. Even if it's someone evaluating one chapter. Just tell me your honest opinion.

Gray Heroics: Book 2

A continuation of the previous book, Gray Heroics: Book 1. The world doesn't wait for heroes to be ready. In the aftermath of Book I, the cracks begin to show. Galivinth is no longer carried by raw potential or conviction alone. Powerful enemies, brutal losses, and widening threats force him...

www.scribblehub.com

Hmm, i read chapter 1, but i don't know why it feels like fell flat mate.

I'm very easy person to be impressed, but this time, I didn't even catch the interesting plot. Also, I recommend you to change cover too, to make it more interesting.