Feedback On My Novel (First few chapters)

Salvador_Sequeira

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I think my first chapter is holding me back. I've written four chapters over the last three days, so I'm not expecting many views or anything, but my fear is that everyone who has read the novel only reads the first chapter.

Resultantly, I was hoping to ask if anyone would be so kind as to read the first part of my novel (the first chapter, or however many after) and give me some constructive tips! I understand that it's a lot to ask, so if anyone would like me to read their work in exchange, I would be more than happy to.

Link to The Novel here!
 
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