Feedback on my Introduction

[Lysander_Works]

Quick Question. Is there no time at all caps should be used like you said or say for example someone pleading for their life it could be used there or is it just a no-no overall. ( Also side update I feel my writing style is improving writing each chapter so thank you again I decided to update the previous chapters as I go. So I think all is well on that front.)

It's usually better to to leave it up to the "!" mark, and placing text in bold format is also acceptable. The only exception I could think of is annotating noise, such as *BANG!* or *CRASH!* but I still wouldn't do it myself.