Feedback On First Time Romance Smut Book

[SavoryWords]

Hiya! This is my first time writing a smut and would love honest feedback. A Chet Baker Playlist is a slow-burn romance with jazz, chaos, and NSFW moments.
Looking for thoughts on whether the spice feels natural and the emotions land.

I've written stories that had smut elements but I'm trying to make it a full on smut book while keeping a good plot. Also if you know any other stories like that with good amount of smut + good plot let me know I really want to read that. I feel like there aren't enough stories like that.

Read here: A CB Playlist ( Chet Baker Reincarnated)

 

[SkaraVaden]

Okay, I'm not an expert critic or anything like that, just an avid reader and a fairly amateur writer, but if it helps, here's my opinion:
I quite like your writing style. A mix of direct descriptions and occasional introspection that comes across as quite interesting, almost poetic. You don't waste time with redundant descriptions, but you manage to create the right atmosphere, and you also convey very well what the characters feel and think.
As for the spicy scenes, which is what interests you, they're exactly the same. There isn't much yet, which doesn't allow me to go into great detail, but what there is seems quite well developed. Your way of describing them is as raw as the scene itself, reinforcing the feeling. You don't romanticize anything, which, given the situations, I think fits perfectly. I'd love to read more, story and spicy-wise.