John_Owl
Per aspera ad astra.
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Hey all. So, I would like some feedback on my witch quadrilogy. It is smut, so beware of that. I'm mostly curious about the flow and how it ends. That said, it was primarily a writing exercise for me to hone my skills and try a new setting, characters, and style. So take that into account. But with these in mind, I'm open to any feedback you'd like to offer, as long as it's constructive.
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Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:
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