TheGreatOne6000
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Hello!
So I made a slice of life/romance webnovel and would like some feedback on the first few chapters. You are free(And encouraged) to read more if you somehow enjoy my story. I intended for the story to have some heavy thematic elements on talent, self loathing, purpose, and identity. However, I'm young and not very experienced so I want to know if my execution was done properly.
Short summary: A boy goes to the 2nd best high school in America and meets a girl. His relationship with her and those around him develop and change in platonic and romantic ways.
If you want to review it directly, comment, or reply on this thread, those all work just fine.
Story here:
www.scribblehub.com
Enjoy!
So I made a slice of life/romance webnovel and would like some feedback on the first few chapters. You are free(And encouraged) to read more if you somehow enjoy my story. I intended for the story to have some heavy thematic elements on talent, self loathing, purpose, and identity. However, I'm young and not very experienced so I want to know if my execution was done properly.
Short summary: A boy goes to the 2nd best high school in America and meets a girl. His relationship with her and those around him develop and change in platonic and romantic ways.
If you want to review it directly, comment, or reply on this thread, those all work just fine.
Story here:
A Promise from Me to You
Talent and change, those two define humanity. Yet, Elliot had neither. As a freshman at Laxus Flare Academy, Elliot Elanderin is surrounded by brilliance and exellence you couldn't find anywhere else. Compared to them, or anyone really, Elliot is pathetically ordinary—someone without a defining...
Enjoy!
