Feedback for my fantasy novel

[MissAlbedo]

Hello!

I'm a new author on this website and never interact in forums in general but as an author it would be great with some feedbacks of my story.
From readers and authors viewpoint would be great. I don't expect you to read all my chapters but just chapter one.
I'm not a native speaker since my mother tongue is Danish so my story is not written in advance English so don't expect a sci-fi poetry that will blow your mind xD

I welcome any kinds of critics since I want to improve and polish my writing skills.

My story's genre is: Fantasy, reincarnation, wuxia, comedy, female lead.

Thank you in advance :3

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The link below is to my story named Abandoned Goddess

Abandoned Goddess

“I’ll show you all my talents! I didn’t attend all those prestigious schools for nothing!” In this world everything exists because of the spirit flow. It had existed along the humans since the beginning of time. Mei Mei lived in the modern century and was reincarnated into a...

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[LunaSoltaer]

Real quick, Abandoned Goddess is supposed to be your entry point into this world, right? as opposed to We Got Screwed By The Gods?

I put it in my to read list

 

[MissAlbedo]

Real quick, Abandoned Goddess is supposed to be your entry point into this world, right? as opposed to We Got Screwed By The Gods?

I put it in my to read list

Yes correct abandoned Goddess. We got screwed is a prequel

 

[M.G.Driver]

It's pretty good. Read a few chapters on Royal Road before. Like the chill vibes.

 

[MissAlbedo]

It's pretty good. Read a few chapters on Royal Road before. Like the chill vibes.

Thank you :D