Feedback for my FanFiction

[Zeroski]

The first book I have ever written. Please ignore the poor grammar mistakes in the first few chapters as I struggle with the writing style.
Looking for feedback on more recent chapters and if I should fix anything with the way I write or express the characters.

Thanks in Advance

Rise Of Android

Story follows a transmigrated individual who has no knowledge of the Dragonball world. He will be an Android with a slight twist. He is mostly neutral toward all the main cast and villains. This a an DBZ/DBS AU because I’m bound to mess up with the story. P....

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[Zeroski]

Sorry I have edited and added the link. Still new to all this My bad.