Feedback for Monke story.

[IAmGuavaFruit]

Heyo, lookin' for some feedback in terms of writing, fight scenes, as well as just normal scenes. If possible, even the mental state of MC.
Here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/229774/reject-humanity-return-to-monke/

 

[Leti]

Most readers on ScribbleHub are silent.
For feedback, I recommend these sites. They have point systems that encourage users to leave reviews. If you need opinions for your first chapters in this site, I recommend these threads.