Feedback for Five Chapters

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I was hoping to see if someone could tell me via PM what might have kept my readers interested for the first 5-6 chapters of my story versus, but not so much the rest. Please post here if you're willing to take on the task then PM me later what you think. I'm really not sure what I should fix.

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