Feedback for chapter 1

[Adonalsium-Will-Remember-Ou]

https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1493021-ruins-of-gold/chapter/1735925/?cid=3654097 this is my current chapter 1 and need feedback about the history lessons how much exposition dumpy does it feel how does it flow to the next part after the lessons how are Jonahs thoughts

Also feedback on the remaining part of the chapter would be nice too
(Also pls give obsidian language tool alternatives majority doesnt work like harpy for ios)