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I am fairly new to the community and looking for any advice on my work. Let me know if you have any ideas on improving my work or even questions to help me find what I need to flesh out more. Even if you just have an opinion on which character you find to be most entertaining, I'm hoping to get some interaction with my stories. I plan to make Accounts Of An Ordinary Bookstore... a series and The Sensational Nanny Strikes Again is a casual fantasy-comedy.
 
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