Fantasy Romance review swap

[MoonLight27]

Hello seniors and my dear fellow newbie authors! I want to request for a review swap. the novels having Historical Timetravel Romance genre are preferred as I am a huge fan of it.
My novel is also of that genre, so if you are also a fan of it, please read and review my book and I will do the same.
Book Name: Destined or Fated?
Book Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/304875/destined-or-fated/

You will find my novel on the latest released section also.
Let's begin!!!!!!!!

 

[Deleted member 45782]

Interesting. Good luck with your story! :)

 

[RepresentingWrath]

Hello seniors and my dear fellow newbie authors! I want to request for a review swap. the novels having Historical Timetravel Romance genre are preferred as I am a huge fan of it.
My novel is also of that genre, so if you are also a fan of it, please read and review my book and I will do the same.
Book Name: Destined or Fated?
Book Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/304875/destined-or-fated/

You will find my novel on the latest released section also.
Let's begin!!!!!!!!

I'm not a native English speaker, so take my 'review' with a grain of salt. I don't need a review swap as I've only read the first chapter of your novel. Not my cup of tea.

Objectively, you should work on your grammar.

Subjectively, chapter lengths are too short for my taste, and the way you phrase your sentences is weird. I also think(subjectively) that you should work on the lengths of your paragraphs. I don't know the technical terms, so bear with me. I think that some of your paragraphs are overloaded, and you should divide them. In my subjective opinion, you mess up with the positioning of sentences. It's harder to understand what actually happens when everything is in one single block of text.

Hope this will help you at least a little bit.

 

[MoonLight27]

I'm not a native English speaker, so take my 'review' with a grain of salt. I don't need a review swap as I've only read the first chapter of your novel. Not my cup of tea.

Objectively, you should work on your grammar.

Subjectively, chapter lengths are too short for my taste, and the way you phrase your sentences is weird. I also think(subjectively) that you should work on the lengths of your paragraphs. I don't know the technical terms, so bear with me. I think that some of your paragraphs are overloaded, and you should divide them. In my subjective opinion, you mess up with the positioning of sentences. It's harder to understand what actually happens when everything is in one single block of text.

Hope this will help you at least a little bit.

First of all thank you so much for giving me an honest review. I will definitely work on that first chapter of mine! I realized my huge mistake, in the process of improving the further chapters, I totally forgot to correct my first chapter!
After this review, I am bit scared to ask?... Would you please read the further chapters and tell me apart from grammar mistakes, the main story is interest or boring? Please!! I need such reviews on my main story at this stage, so that I can change the plot to make it more interesting!

Interesting. Good luck with your story! :)

Thank you so much ?! I will correct my grammar mistakes right away so that you won't get bored and your interest will remain still intact!?

 

[RepresentingWrath]

First of all thank you so much for giving me an honest review. I will definitely work on that first chapter of mine! I realized my huge mistake, in the process of improving the further chapters, I totally forgot to correct my first chapter!
After this review, I am bit scared to ask?... Would you please read the further chapters and tell me apart from grammar mistakes, the main story is interest or boring? Please!! I need such reviews on my main story at this stage, so that I can change the plot to make it more interesting!


Thank you so much ?! I will correct my grammar mistakes right away so that you won't get bored and your interest will remain still intact!?

Don't be scared to ask anyone for feedback. And sorry, I won't continue reading it. The story isn't suited for me. But remember that the story must be interesting for you first and foremost. There can be a lot of guides to writing this or that, and you can ask for advice countless times. In the end, what matters the most is your enjoyment and creativity.

Don't upload all your chapters in bulks. 1, a maximum of 3 chapters a day is acceptable. More than that, and you will lose on publicity. And don't cater to the readers. If you aren't writing with this intention from the very beginning, don't cater to them. A very small amount of readers is vocal, and everyone likes different things in stories. By listening to how to 'improve' the novel from someone, you will inevitably disappoint others.

 

[MoonLight27]

Yes, I do enjoy my story but since I am new to this world, I got scared a bit and was about to drop my novel. Then I thought that why should I give up on my first creation? The one who likes these things will support me, and even those who don't like this genre have helped me generously (just like you). So I will take your advice in my mind and continue posting a better version of my creation?!!!