Evaluation of the book The Mad Immortal.

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Hello everyone, please rate my book for the quality of the language. I am not a native speaker, so it is difficult to understand how naturally my author's style is perceived.
Thanks a lot for the help.

The Mad Immortal

A Devil torn from the depths of Hell is reborn in the body of a child and condemns that child to suffering. From his earliest childhood, Grey is drawn into a large-scale conspiracy. He is used. He is betrayed. He is tormented. How is he supposed to survive if he...

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