Does this sound like a My Hero Academia rip off

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So, I want to write a superpower story, but every idea sounds like a rip-off of My Hero Academia, so I figure maybe it was how they got their powers; if I change that, it would differentiate itself. I'd like some feedback on the idea.

The Relic Age


The Awakening​


No one remembers who held the first relic. Some say it was forged in a laboratory, others that it fell from the sky like shards of broken gods. What is known is this: the objects chose. A man held a rusted dagger and conjured storms. A woman clasped a cracked locket and walked through fire. When they died, their relics did not perish with them. They reappeared, unburnt, waiting for new hands.


The world called them Power Objects—items that bound their wielder to supernatural force.




Collapse of the Old Order​


At first, governments tried to regulate them. Armies seized relics, scientists dissected them, corporations lobbied to patent them. But relics had their own will—compatibility varied wildly. A soldier given a C-ranked relic might sync at “-” and wield nothing more than sparks, while a street urchin with a “+” could bring cities to their knees.


The imbalance shattered the idea of nations. Borders meant nothing against individuals who could split mountains. Within decades, parliaments and presidents were toppled, replaced by those who commanded the strongest relics.




The Power Economy​


In the new age, relics became the only currency that mattered.


  • Corporations turned into power-brokers, buying and selling relics in brutal markets. They groomed compatibilities like bloodlines, running breeding programs to produce heirs more likely to bond at “+.”
  • Hero Societies rose, promising protection in exchange for loyalty. They wore capes and symbols but ruled as feudal lords.
  • Villain Syndicates thrived as their dark mirrors, calling themselves liberators of the poor but hoarding relics like dragons.
  • The Relicless—the powerless majority—lived as laborers, servants, or cannon fodder, clinging to the dream of one day touching an object that would elevate them.

Relics are ranked F to S, from trivial parlor tricks to powers that can rewrite landscapes. Each individual’s compatibility with a relic is graded –, N, or +, shifting their effective output. A C-ranked relic with a “+” wielder might rival a natural A.




The Eternal Cycle​


Because relics reappear upon death, they carry legacy. Every object has a history of wielders, battles, betrayals. Some are cursed, always dooming their owners. Some are worshiped, their appearance triggering wars. Children whisper their names like fairy tales: The Black Thorn. The Mirror Crown. The Iron Comet.


To kill a wielder is to gamble—will you inherit their strength, or will the relic reject you? This gamble fuels endless conflict. Hero and villain, corporation and syndicate, rebel and king: all circle around the eternal lottery of relics.




The World Now​


The old globe has splintered into city-states and power zones, each ruled by those with the strongest relics. Cities are fortresses, and countryside villages survive only under the patronage of a relic lord. Black markets thrive where relic fragments and counterfeit compatibility tests are sold.


Everyday life is measured by proximity to power:


  • The relicless or also known as Lessers scrape together wages, hoping to be sponsored.
  • Middle classes barter loyalties for a chance at lesser relics.
  • The elite trade S-ranked artifacts like crowns, forging dynasties of steel and flame.

And above them all, whispered in awe and fear, are the Eternal Names—the S-ranked relics whose wielders write history with each generation.
 

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I've been in your situation once.

My tip: Do not involve any school, that's all. Writing a superhero story is alright. Adding a superhero high-school will instantly make people point and say "MHA ripoff," even if the idea had been long done before.

Better yet, don't make minors the main characters. See MHA Vigilante. Yes, Pop Step was a minor, a highschooler. But just one of her and not the whole school will make it far less like MHA ripoff.
 

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I've been in your situation once.

My tip: Do not involve any school, that's all. Writing a superhero story is alright. Adding a superhero high-school will instantly make people point and say "MHA ripoff," even if the idea had been long done before.

Better yet, don't make minors the main characters. See MHA Vigilante. Yes, Pop Step was a minor, a highschooler. But just one of her and not the whole school will make it far less like MHA ripoff.
Thanks, that's a helpful tip.
 

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That's odd that people would make that association. I'd be more likely to think "The Xavier Institute for the Gifted" ripoff than an MHA one myself...
That also fits, but I guess most people don't automatically think of that one because they tend to focus more on fighting and getting humans to accept them than superheroes in high school.
 

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To paraphrase Picasso, "Good authors copy, great authors steal." ?

In all seriousness, there is nothing truly "original". Everything is derived from something else. I wouldn't worry too much about it. ?
 

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MHA didn't invent the concept of a superhero/magic powers school, as long as it's not about a powerless guy who randomly meets his idol and gains his powers by eating hair and then slowly reconnects with his childhoodfriend turned bully I think you're fine

If anything this story sounds more closer to the concept of Harry Potter's power system, especially with the ranking of relics
 

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So, I want to write a superpower story, but every idea sounds like a rip-off of My Hero Academia, so I figure maybe it was how they got their powers; if I change that, it would differentiate itself. I'd like some feedback on the idea.
First of all, "My Hero Academia" is not an original idea; other works like "Sky High," "The X-Men," and "Worm" did it first and did it better. Rip off as much as you want; your work will probably be an improvement over MHA's ending.
 

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First of all, "My Hero Academia" is not an original idea; other works like "Sky High," "The X-Men," and "Worm" did it first and did it better. Rip off as much as you want; your work will probably be an improvement over MHA's ending.
That's true so long as I put my own spin on it, I think I'll be able to get away from MHA.
 
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