Aiyoki
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I've got far too many ideas to put down all at once but I often think about those "Critical moments" when a character goes into a mode that can only be described as unexpectedly surprising or OP.
One such idea I have comes when one of the characters in the MC's party falls to a villain. This moment is so impactful for one of the supporting characters in the party that she literally loses her sh*t and surprises even the MC when she barrels forward with blinding speed to smash her weapon (We'll just say it's a halberd) into the antagonist. The sheer force of her attack not only critically injures and sends the villain careening into the sky but also shatters the weapon she's been using since the beginning of the story. She then proceeds to abandon the weapon and continue to ruthlessly beat the villain to death.
The moment is littered with emotions and surprise from all when they realize a very startling truth about their most docile party member:
She's not an elf but a Cataclysm class demon and has effectively been lying to the MC about herself the entire time.
Really though the question I'm curious about is if anyone has written moments like this where a character's strength ends up being more than their own gear can handle?
One such idea I have comes when one of the characters in the MC's party falls to a villain. This moment is so impactful for one of the supporting characters in the party that she literally loses her sh*t and surprises even the MC when she barrels forward with blinding speed to smash her weapon (We'll just say it's a halberd) into the antagonist. The sheer force of her attack not only critically injures and sends the villain careening into the sky but also shatters the weapon she's been using since the beginning of the story. She then proceeds to abandon the weapon and continue to ruthlessly beat the villain to death.
The moment is littered with emotions and surprise from all when they realize a very startling truth about their most docile party member:
She's not an elf but a Cataclysm class demon and has effectively been lying to the MC about herself the entire time.
Really though the question I'm curious about is if anyone has written moments like this where a character's strength ends up being more than their own gear can handle?