Do you like narrators in stories?

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Do you like narrators in stories? explaining the concepts of the world, explaining what's happening in the scene. Or do you prefer a character from the story itself speaking/narrating the scene?

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I like it when the narrator emerges for a broad exposition for a short while and then focusing back at the MC. I use it because my narrator is 3rd pov omniscient but for other it can vary.
 

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Do you like narrators in stories? explaining the concepts of the world, explaining what's happening in the scene. Or do you prefer a character from the story itself speaking/narrating the scene?

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Depends on the theme and direction of the story I'm writing/reading, but one thing I avoid if I'm using a 'narrator' is to 'spoonfeed' readers, so if the story I'm reading does that, I tend to drop it.
 

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I don't like soulless narrators. If the story does have one, I want them to have personality. Otherwise I'm fine with either.
 

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I don't like soulless narrators. If the story does have one, I want them to have personality. Otherwise I'm fine with either.
narratorbutgamer.jpg
 

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I don't mind.

In anime, they have no choice. There isn't any good (and cost effective) way to narrate "narration boxes" the manga has except the narrator voiceover for the scene in the anime adaptation.

You either have this, or have to equip with his personal ChatGPT inside his head to constantly explain stuff which may be even worse than narrator the protagonist can't hear. They aren't Deadpool (until they are)

In the novels, the info dumping is often criticized. Parts where the author lengthily describes the history of their original fantasy universe (tm) and so on, one which would be handled by a narrator, those are supposed to be a problem but I don't feel it. We are all amateurs here, we are not supposed to know better.
 

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Doesn't that depend on the medium? In a visual medium, in which there is no way of spinning a narrative between dialogue, there is no other choice but to have parts "narrated" that you can't find a place within the story for. Of course, even then you shouldn't just slap a lot of "World Building" into one chapter, because readers will tune out and skip most likely.
In a medium of purely written form, you shouldn't, at any point, "just narrate" anything. Neither a character nor a third person narrator should just rattle on forever about whatever happened in the past or is happening right now, unless a lot of things happen at the moment and truly need to be brought up in detail. Nobody's perfect, I know I've done it in the past and I couldn't erase it in my most recent story either, but when it comes to narration of lore and general world building, I'm trying to blend it in with events, have people explain more organically about things and break up narration into parts, so it won't hit and suffocate a reader to death. That's the best I could come up with, if a story requires a lot of lore to be explained.
 

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Do you like narrators in stories? explaining the concepts of the world, explaining what's happening in the scene. Or do you prefer a character from the story itself speaking/narrating the scene?

This question came to mind after some people were discussing this question in hunter x hunter.
I do like narrator's in story but also i disljke it so plz maintain a line that makes narrator as a mirage
Do you like narrators in stories? explaining the concepts of the world, explaining what's happening in the scene. Or do you prefer a character from the story itself speaking/narrating the scene?

This question came to mind after some people were discussing this question in hunter x hunter.
 

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Do you like narrators in stories? explaining the concepts of the world, explaining what's happening in the scene. Or do you prefer a character from the story itself speaking/narrating the scene?

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What is a narrator? Isn't you are the narrator of you are writing the story at third person?
 

georgelee5786

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They're ok. I think they're better in small doses though
 
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