NotaNuffian
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While I was plagerizing Daoist Gu's power system, I already noticed one of the many kinks it had and it was the fact that the author used bugs (gu) to replace the standard elixirs, sacred treasures and even skills in xianxia. Ultimately the bugs can be split into two groups; consumables and permanents.
Consumables are bugs that often grant users to help their bodies to grow stronger, like the Black and White Boar bugs that give their user strength of pigs and Jade Bone bugs that grant user with jade bone. They are straightforward and once the user's body has fully grown from their effect, the bugs lose their purpose and can be traded with other users.
The permanents are simple to understand as well; the user needs the bug to do the things they want. I am genuinely surprised that defensive bugs like Copper Skin bug and Stone Skin bug are not consumables and requiring the user to have them in their dantian to use their effect, though it is possible to permanently have their effects superimposed onto the user's body but the time and effort for it is too BS compared to consumable bugs.
I am mainly focusing on body cultivating because it is my favorite topic but I am also puzzled by how to continue with my plagerizing. So for said organs in my work to work, they have to be placed at the correctly allocated spot, an example is the Gorilla Glands that looks like a pair of testicles that require to be placed beneath the rhomboid muscles, each testicle to each side and the glands will secrete chemicals into the shoulder blade muscles and goes three ways; to both arms and down the spine to promote muscular growth on arms, back and some little bit more might go down the lower limbs.
I have no plans to be like Daoist Gu's bugs leveling and the organs in my work will not grow, instead they serve one function and can do more when paired with other organs for more synergy. Like the Gorilla Glands can pair with Kangaroo Ligament to give the user a strong body that can dish out explosive strikes.
However, body cultivating organs will be as useless as the tail bone once the body has been developed and I see no purpose for their existense. Initially I planned to have a self destruct sequence where the organs will dissolve/ shrivel itself and get expelled from the body after use, but then I think that I should just go with cutting them out and throw away.
So what are your opinions in discarding useless organs?
Consumables are bugs that often grant users to help their bodies to grow stronger, like the Black and White Boar bugs that give their user strength of pigs and Jade Bone bugs that grant user with jade bone. They are straightforward and once the user's body has fully grown from their effect, the bugs lose their purpose and can be traded with other users.
The permanents are simple to understand as well; the user needs the bug to do the things they want. I am genuinely surprised that defensive bugs like Copper Skin bug and Stone Skin bug are not consumables and requiring the user to have them in their dantian to use their effect, though it is possible to permanently have their effects superimposed onto the user's body but the time and effort for it is too BS compared to consumable bugs.
I am mainly focusing on body cultivating because it is my favorite topic but I am also puzzled by how to continue with my plagerizing. So for said organs in my work to work, they have to be placed at the correctly allocated spot, an example is the Gorilla Glands that looks like a pair of testicles that require to be placed beneath the rhomboid muscles, each testicle to each side and the glands will secrete chemicals into the shoulder blade muscles and goes three ways; to both arms and down the spine to promote muscular growth on arms, back and some little bit more might go down the lower limbs.
I have no plans to be like Daoist Gu's bugs leveling and the organs in my work will not grow, instead they serve one function and can do more when paired with other organs for more synergy. Like the Gorilla Glands can pair with Kangaroo Ligament to give the user a strong body that can dish out explosive strikes.
However, body cultivating organs will be as useless as the tail bone once the body has been developed and I see no purpose for their existense. Initially I planned to have a self destruct sequence where the organs will dissolve/ shrivel itself and get expelled from the body after use, but then I think that I should just go with cutting them out and throw away.
So what are your opinions in discarding useless organs?