Desperately in need of feedback for my recently published novel: Rise Of The Crime Lord. Genre: Sci-Fi, Crime, Tragedy, Mystery, Action, Low Fantasy

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Rise Of The Crime Lord

In the neon-drenched streets of Corinth, where crime lords rule and loyalty is as fleeting as a shadow, a storm is brewing. Leon, the enigmatic leader of the Syndicate, has spent three years building an empire that threatens to upset the delicate balance of power. But his past is catching...

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I need feedback on my novel. Please review, like, and comment. I appreciate any critiques that can help me refine and improve the story. Thank you very much for taking your time to give me feedback. I appreciate it a lot