Deities of Ruin: Looking for Feedback

Emerald_Severwill

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Heya~ I'm Em.
After two bi-monthly breaks between chapters, I am back and getting serious about writing this story.
At the time of me posting this, there are currently 4 chapters out with a 5th soon to be finished. I plan to be posting new chapters twice weekly, likely on Mondays and Fridays.
Now that the 4th chapter is up, and the very basic introduction of the world can be read, I am very interested in what other members of this site have to say about it so far, and would appreciate any criticism/feedback.
Deities of Ruin is a group project put together by a few friends, in which I am the lead author of. It is a story about friends who met over Discord+various games online, getting transported to a dystopian fantasy world where they try to survive and find their way back home while fighting various monsters along with god-like beings that defy the laws of physics.

Thanks in advance for your time to read over this post, and thanks for putting the time aside to read the small amount of content it has available at this time. (Link below)
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/139553/deities-of-ruin/
 
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