Crossposting here from QQ, FFN, and AO3

[Bub3loka]

Hello everyone. I am not exactly a new writer, as I've been writing for exactly two years in two weeks. However, I consider myself as something of a prolific writer, having written four stories that are constantly updated, but all of them are on other websites.

I crossposted two of my stories here in hopes for more feedback than the regular crowd over at FFN, QQ, or AO3. Sadly, I feel like I am not getting as much views or comments as I wished. Not sure if my synopsis are off or perhaps readers are wary of 300k+ words stories popping in all of a sudden.

Anyway, here are the stories I posted here.

The first story is A Lament of Snow and Magic, an HP/ASOIAF crossover set in Harry Potter shortly after Harry slays the Basilisk. It features Jon transmigrating into Harry, with Ghost in his mind for the ride.

This is mostly an HP setting as we discover Harry and Jon's journey through magical Britain with several AU elements, as expected from practically any HP fic.

The second story is The Arc Moon System, A RWBY story featuring a better trained Jaune Arc who stumbles upon a crystal that gives him a system of sorts. It is very limited, only providing basic information, with no gamer body or mind or even a leveling system. It's mostly there for quests and for Jaune to use its Gacha store to learn more abilities. Despite the premise, this story is quite serious in tone, featuring a lot of bloody and gritty aspects that goes deep into the darkest aspects of humanity.

I fear many don't have the patience to read the story, as the first 20 or so chapters are an original arc designed to develop Jaune as a character. In the latest chapter, Jaune is just about to start Beacon, but as with all of my stories, it will be epic in length and I have the ending planned out.

I have two more stories that I worry are not fit for this site, as they are a tad more...risque than anything I've read here. They are not by any means pure smut, but simply have several scenes of them. Still not sure if I should post them here, but I'll wait and see.

Now, I really wish some feedback. What do you think of my fics? What can be done to improve? What am I doing right? So on and so forth.

 

[StoneInky]

Hello everyone. I am not exactly a new writer, as I've been writing for exactly two years in two weeks. However, I consider myself as something of a prolific writer, having written four stories that are constantly updated, but all of them are on other websites.

I crossposted two of my stories here in hopes for more feedback than the regular crowd over at FFN, QQ, or AO3. Sadly, I feel like I am not getting as much views or comments as I wished. Not sure if my synopsis are off or perhaps readers are wary of 300k+ words stories popping in all of a sudden.

Anyway, here are the stories I posted here.

The first story is A Lament of Snow and Magic, an HP/ASOIAF crossover set in Harry Potter shortly after Harry slays the Basilisk. It features Jon transmigrating into Harry, with Ghost in his mind for the ride.

This is mostly an HP setting as we discover Harry and Jon's journey through magical Britain with several AU elements, as expected from practically any HP fic.

The second story is The Arc Moon System, A RWBY story featuring a better trained Jaune Arc who stumbles upon a crystal that gives him a system of sorts. It is very limited, only providing basic information, with no gamer body or mind or even a leveling system. It's mostly there for quests and for Jaune to use its Gacha store to learn more abilities. Despite the premise, this story is quite serious in tone, featuring a lot of bloody and gritty aspects that goes deep into the darkest aspects of humanity.

I fear many don't have the patience to read the story, as the first 20 or so chapters are an original arc designed to develop Jaune as a character. In the latest chapter, Jaune is just about to start Beacon, but as with all of my stories, it will be epic in length and I have the ending planned out.

I have two more stories that I worry are not fit for this site, as they are a tad more...risque than anything I've read here. They are not by any means pure smut, but simply have several scenes of them. Still not sure if I should post them here, but I'll wait and see.

Now, I really wish some feedback. What do you think of my fics? What can be done to improve? What am I doing right? So on and so forth.

This site has so much smutt, that it may as well be called Smutthub. Plenty of writers have uploaded pure smutt novels asking for feedback, so it is fine. Is it GL? HL? BL? Or something else?

Hm... There's too much to just write here, since you have multiple novels. Keep in mind that I will not completely read your novel if I don't feel like it, but if you're okay with that, I'll send you a private review. In 'Conversation'.

 

[Bub3loka]

This site has so much smutt, that it may as well be called Smutthub. Plenty of writers have uploaded pure smutt novels asking for feedback, so it is fine. Is it GL? HL? BL? Or something else?

Hm... There's too much to just write here, since you have multiple novels. Keep in mind that I will not completely read your novel if I don't feel like it, but if you're okay with that, I'll send you a private review. In 'Conversation'.

Honestly, it does not even have a single full smut scene...aside from a bad guy raping a girl I suppose that I just skimmed over. It's more like I plan to write smut but it's not really a major part of the story; I prefer writing the plot and characterization and let any smut to come naturally.

I appreciate any feedback. I suppose I'll start posting my two other stories anyway.

 

[AYM]

Welcome to SmutHub.

According to your story descriptions, you're updating every four weeks which is not as frequent as a lot of readers here are used to. Typically popular stories have updates at least weekly. You'll also probably get more comments posting weekly, but a lot of readers don't comment anything.

 

[Bub3loka]

Welcome to SmutHub.

According to your story descriptions, you're updating every four weeks which is not as frequent as a lot of readers here are used to. Typically popular stories have updates at least weekly. You'll also probably get more comments posting weekly, but a lot of readers don't comment anything.

I update every two weeks. I just dumped my chapters over the past few months, which messed up the average update schedule.

I just posted my two other stories, with three chapters each. I plan to post three chapters every day until they catch up with the rest of my stories on other websites.

 

[AYM]

I update every two weeks. I just dumped my chapters over the past few months, which messed up the average update schedule.

I just posted my two other stories, with three chapters each. I plan to post three chapters every day until they catch up with the rest of my stories on other websites.

I see. It's not weekly but it's definitely better than monthly updates. Best of luck. ??

Edit: You should include your upload schedule plan in your synopsis.

 

[Anonjohn20]

Hello everyone. I am not exactly a new writer, as I've been writing for exactly two years in two weeks. However, I consider myself as something of a prolific writer, having written four stories that are constantly updated, but all of them are on other websites.

I crossposted two of my stories here in hopes for more feedback than the regular crowd over at FFN, QQ, or AO3. Sadly, I feel like I am not getting as much views or comments as I wished. Not sure if my synopsis are off or perhaps readers are wary of 300k+ words stories popping in all of a sudden.

Anyway, here are the stories I posted here.

The first story is A Lament of Snow and Magic, an HP/ASOIAF crossover set in Harry Potter shortly after Harry slays the Basilisk. It features Jon transmigrating into Harry, with Ghost in his mind for the ride.

This is mostly an HP setting as we discover Harry and Jon's journey through magical Britain with several AU elements, as expected from practically any HP fic.

The second story is The Arc Moon System, A RWBY story featuring a better trained Jaune Arc who stumbles upon a crystal that gives him a system of sorts. It is very limited, only providing basic information, with no gamer body or mind or even a leveling system. It's mostly there for quests and for Jaune to use its Gacha store to learn more abilities. Despite the premise, this story is quite serious in tone, featuring a lot of bloody and gritty aspects that goes deep into the darkest aspects of humanity.

I fear many don't have the patience to read the story, as the first 20 or so chapters are an original arc designed to develop Jaune as a character. In the latest chapter, Jaune is just about to start Beacon, but as with all of my stories, it will be epic in length and I have the ending planned out.

I have two more stories that I worry are not fit for this site, as they are a tad more...risque than anything I've read here. They are not by any means pure smut, but simply have several scenes of them. Still not sure if I should post them here, but I'll wait and see.

Now, I really wish some feedback. What do you think of my fics? What can be done to improve? What am I doing right? So on and so forth.

While this site allows fanfiction, it is much less popular here than in the 3 sites you mentioned. You're going to earn readers here slowly with that genre; have patience.

 

[Bub3loka]

I see. It's not weekly but it's definitely better than monthly updates. Best of luck. ??

Edit: You should include your upload schedule plan in your synopsis.

Will do.

While this site allows fanfiction, it is much less popular here than in the 3 sites you mentioned. You're going to earn readers here slowly with that genre; have patience.

Thanks!

 

[Alski]

While this site allows fanfiction, it is much less popular here than in the 3 sites you mentioned. You're going to earn readers here slowly with that genre; have patience.

its 30-40% of trending, its just most of us who activly use the forum that dont like it.

 

[Anonjohn20]

its 30-40% of trending

Oh no.

 

[Alski]

Oh no.

Ikr