Completed the first arc of my rewritten adult sci-fi story - Looking for feedback

Beta_Krogoth

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Hey everyone, i've very recently finished the first arc of my story, it was a rewrite of a story I wrote years ago that started off as a porn story but rapidly developed into something better, trouble was I could never recommend the beginning to anyone due to it just being smut...

The rewrite does have two chapters of smut (Futa on male stuff mostly - skippable though) but is otherwise an action/horror/romance story that revolves around an anomalous corruption. I have long term plans for this story (as anyone who's read the original will know) but the rewrite won't follow the exact same path as the original. Recieved good comments and reviews so far but i'm looking to get feedback if anyone is interested.

 
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